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Whoo this prompt was hard. I guess I like the piece, though it does feel like you read it quite quickly, with no periods. I probably wouldn't write like this normally (especially not for 24k words!), but it was good to try it for once ^^

and so they danced

April 16, 2021

His house was small, but full of furniture; paintings, couches, lamps, tables, ottomans, and more chairs than ten people could have used, yet, she was still as drawn to him as she had been when he first smiled at her over a cup of coffee, and so, it seemed they were now using the stereotyped term of "dating", or in other words, occasionally sneaking a kiss when their professor wasn't looking, or running barefoot down a splintered dock as the sun sets in front of them, casting bright pink shadows on the incoming swell, and so, tonight they danced, cheek to cheek, in his cluttered living room as Lover played in the background, and the moon and stars twirled and spun along with them in their own living room, high above the clouds.

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5 Comments
  • Zirong

    awww this is so sweet!

    re: thank you!


    24 days ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thanks!


    25 days ago
  • Avril

    This is gorgeous. "running barefoot down a splintered dock" - I love that!


    25 days ago
  • Awesome Sienna

    So pwetty!


    25 days ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Lol I just realized I have a piece called "And They Danced"


    25 days ago