Writing4Life

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Not too sure how I feel about this, but oh well. Is this a sonnet? Idk is all that is needed to make it a sonnet 14 lines? It doesn't feel quite right, but anyway, hope you like it my cultlets.

Writing IS power

April 11, 2021

The late afternoon sun,
Slants over my desk.
Illuminating my pen,
And sending brilliant shards of light into my eyes.
Pen and paper,
Two ordinary things,
But when they are combined with your mind,
Your heart,
Your soul;
They create masterpieces.

Pouring your heart into your stories,
Seeping your soul into your poems,
Some will not understand,
But writing is power.

 

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8 Comments
  • barelybear

    Re: just an unconscious talent then. Looks like we have a modern-day Shakespeare :D
    Ah thank you :)
    Have a great evening!
    Ellie <3


    5 months ago
  • barelybear

    This is so cool! There’s this real beauty and joy behind your words that made me smile so much :D
    I mean 14 lines yeah that’s a sonnet haha. I think something else people look for is a turning point/Volta. I think the bit where you start “Pouring your heart into masterpieces” works as a volta though because of the change in rhythm and the sudden personal connection. So a really great sonnet :D
    Re: ahhh thank youuuu I was nervous about that one haha :)


    5 months ago
  • Nyla

    Awww I love this Ruth, it's so true! "Seeping your soul" there's just something so wonderful about that phrasing!!


    5 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Re: Yeah and np. She did :) Well one of our threesome, my longer bestie, I haven't told....


    5 months ago
  • Awesome Sienna

    Wait, Ruth, you wrote this!? It's sooo good. So awesome!
    Re: Oh yeah, bout that. Soz! ;)


    5 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Whoa. This is gorgeous.
    Re: Thanks and yeah I'm glad :)


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    re: also wow i never realized how many pieces i have liked haha
    im at 2021 now lol


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    oh my word omw omw!!! YES! BANG is such a vibe!! the new album is insanely good. turning out/dont throw out my legos hit me hard. such relatable lyrics. but i love all their songs! i got so happy when i heard you like them haha


    5 months ago