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Why Is Sadness So Poetic

March 30, 2021

The flowers seem so wilted
The roads seem newly cracked
The houses are extra dull
Where's the sun, I want it back

The stars don't seem to shine
The whole sky is black as ink
The world is a melancholy place
I wish I didn't have to think

The people seem more fake
All the sorries don't seem real
Really, who are they kidding
They don't know what I feel

Mourning fills the air like clouds
And all are sympathetic
Tears sparkle in my eyes
Why is sadness so poetic?
This is about the prompt: Write about your town on a day a close family member is sick. It turned out very melancholy. It is also a bit more about the feelings of the POV character and less about how the town actually looks. XD 


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  • Kasilee

    Love this!!!

    6 months ago
  • Parisienne

    WOW!!! This is amazing!!! :)

    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    This is awesome and the rhyming is spot-on!! Really great imagery!

    6 months ago
  • Ree Sethu

    this is so wonderful!

    6 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    Re: Thank you :)

    6 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    Re: no problem. Also approximately how many words are your chapters? I've been trying to write my own (it's not going very well, but at least I've actually started writing it after months of procrastinating) and yours seem to be a good length.

    6 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    Re: Haha, I've never had anyone faint before, but lots of people don't go to the top. Also, I finally go that review in.

    6 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    Re: ya, it's pretty great, but it the hight of the walls are a bit to get used to at first, ours are 30 feet

    6 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    Also, this is so beautiful!!!

    6 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    Re: I work at our local climbing gym, I love it there!

    6 months ago
  • Minvra

    Re: Aye

    6 months ago
  • Minvra

    I think, this poem is more planting an idea and question than a town or day a close family member is sick. I love the ballad though! It's so difficult writing short poems and get the meaning or tone.
    Re: Hank The Not-Dog (Footnotes)

    6 months ago
  • BriRiley

    Re: That’s cool! I didn’t know that!

    6 months ago
  • BriRiley

    This title is very intriguing! And I’ve the mood you created in this piece! Good job!
    Re: Ikr! Homeschool moms *rolling eyes* XD jk

    6 months ago