Writing4Life

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How's the rhyme scheme? I was really struggling to find an ending, and it's still not as good as I would've liked, but whatever lol

one is less lonely than two...

March 28, 2021

Grass green,
Sky blue,
Perfect scenes,
Just me and you.


Hand in hand,
Feet dangling over the ocean,

Our love ain't bland,
The world spins in slow motion.

Drinks in old bars,
Rain turns into sunshine,
Movies under the stars,
You're all mine.

But now I walk alone,
And a tear slip down my cheek,
You had a heart of stone,
You said I was weak.

This old town,
Now tainted with memories of you,
And now I drown,
Yet one still feels less lonely than two. 

 

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4 Comments
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    this is so gorgeous!
    hi, I may have asked you this question before but I can't remember, lol. I'm catholic, yay, so fellow Christian to christian-what's your opinion on the lgbtq+ community? (please don't unfollow me because of this)
    im curious on other people's opinions


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Ooops *slips


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    Oh my wow I loooove this!! The ending is so sad but has such great wording! The rhymes throughout are amazing and the beginning is so romantic!! Great job!
    RE: Aww thanks! Haha rhyming is sooo hard! And aww yeah! Haha yeah it does, thanks! I love it for that although when people find out, It’s very hard to disagree if they call me a “try-hard” XD


    6 months ago
  • SamRose

    Re: Ty!


    6 months ago