Hahaha, don't judge! I tried to rhyme!
Written By: Nyla
March 28, 2021
PROMPT: Week 1 - Hometown
GROUP: Elements of Craft
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Re: haha thanks :D
Yeah Mary Berry is the best, especially if you want a proper classic Victoria sponge :D
but excuse me you did what?! Agh foil in the microwave oh dearryyy...
Okay so basically you choose 3 or 4 eggs, depending on how much cake you want.
- weigh eggs (with shells)
- weigh same amount of butter
- weigh same amount of sugar and beat with butter
- slowly add in eggs
- weigh same amount of flour as eggs
- slowly sieve and fold flour, as little stirring as possible
- cream and jam (I prefer both, but classically it’s just jam)
- nom nom nom :)
So recipes are good, but not quite tailored to your eggs ahah.
Ahhh what a storylineee! I felt so sad, and you really handled the reveal so well! That subtle ironic hint as the plot twisted and began to unravel ahhh wow :D
Have a great morning when you read this haha
Ooh, I really like this! You do such a great job of making your pieces relatable and I love the fun rhyming pattern! Re: Of course! Phew, I was so busy even though I was literally in my house for most of the weekend :) Same here, whenever you write back, I will always reply! We actually didn't have cake since he didn't want it so we made brownies (lots of them, yum!) and got some fun sugar cookies, decorated like basketballs lol. Though, my favorite cake is probably a "Smore's" cake which is a chocolate cake with marshmallow frosting and crumbled graham crackers on top! I've only had it once but it was amazing :) What's your favorite cake? Well, okay, maybe but I wasn't always that good at basketball since I use to travel every time I got the ball lol. Ohhh that makes sense, it isn't really an international sport which is probably for the best since it can be sooooo dangerous!! That's so smart! I wish I was like that but no, whenever I get even the slightest bit scared, I immediately give up trying! Yeah, I feel like little kids are super brave and risky with things but as we grow up, it's like we only focus on what the worst scenario would be! Yesss, lavender is so pretty and ooh mint green is really cool too!
Re: heh thanks :D
Ooh so mushrooms are definitely yuck. I love that you had to search up aubergine haha. Hmm olives. Welllll I used to really hate them, but one time we were at a pizza place for my brother’s birthday, and there was this pot of olives, and everyone was like man you’re missing out. So I tried one, and it was glorious. Fruity slaty heaven with a stone. And I love feta too.
Ngl you got nervous about the rhyme but you killed it with that cologne one :D what a great storyline too, and I love the surgeon image!
Have a good night :)
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Re: aww, thank you so much! :)
Ah, okay cool! Ooh, I don’t know why o didn’t realize you live in Canada when I was talking to you.... that’s so cool! What’s it like (lol, that’ll probably sound stupid, because it’s probably pretty similar to the US, but I live in KY and have never been there so I was just curious).
Ahh, neat! So mine is probably writing (heheh) and Bible study. I like history too, but math.... not so much.
Aw, no prob! I totally get it! :) I’m just happy to talk whenever you have the chance! :)
(hey this is great! Really good job rhyming!) re: haha thanks! Aww thanks! Oh haha that's totally fine :P I like having a unique name :D Oooh your name means winner! I like that :D
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