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After reading this piece, there is a sense of depth and power I feel that emanates from the writer's strong word choice and lyrical writing style. The brevity of the piece also indicates a feeling of temporary liberation and peace that the writer feels once in their musical world.
I would really love to read more about the importance of music in the writer's life. Specifically, more about the 'cavern of chaos' embedded within the writer's soul. This expansion of detail would really add to the creative flavor of the piece as it will show the raw power of a beautiful tune on a troubled heart/mind.
Wow, this piece is so intricate and really explains so much about you as a writer! The sophisticated vocabulary and interesting thought process were really evident with your unique style of writing. The only thing I would focus on more in this piece is your emphasis on the power of music to confront your innate demons; you can use imagery or anecdotes to truly convey the impact music has. Overall, this piece is one of a kind as it is beautifully written in its vocabulary and style. Please keep writing!