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Message to Readers
Any feedback appreciated :))
Everything about this is interesting. I was instantly drawn in by the title because nobody really picks a canary to identify themselves as their animal alter-ego. I was interested to see how you would write it, and you've completely got me captivated and in tears.
Throughout this piece, there is definitely metaphors, imagery, and allusions used. Some sentences I've highlighted are marked with the literary devices. In this piece, the use of imagery was most prominent and it was also the strongest. I suggest to build off your strong use of imagery with sensory detail and more descriptive language to fully achieve the meaning behind your "canary".
Some advice from me, you can take it with a grain of salt if you wish, but I feel like this piece needs more imagery and description of a "canary". You described the voice and the wings, but what other attributes can you add as well?
Overall, good job! I will love to see more of your works in the future.