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Message to Readers

I wrote both in third-person and first-person, although I wonder if it clashes too much. Should I stick with only one perspective?


October 4, 2019

GROUP: True Stories

On the day she was born, she didn't know anything.
Naive and careless like any other child.
Smiling and laughing with no care in the world.

As time passed, she grew older.
She couldn't bear to stay in one place. So she moved.
She walked. She ran. She fell.
Nevertheless, she keeps moving forward.

Wandering endlessly
Finding my own path selflessly
I kept going. Then I stopped.
Standing still, thinking.

Although, the answer was clear as day.
I was fearful of my consciousness.
I knew after my break I would continue to wander.
Although, this time I wasn't alone.



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  • Zen

    How inspirational also deep, love it!!

    about 1 month ago
  • and-peggy

    consider this comment a double thumbs up from me- great writing!

    2 months ago