Age: 16. Male. Not necessarily looking for a career as an author but still have an interest in writing creative pieces as a hobby from time to time - I really like working with technology but also consider law at times. There's alot of things to do.
I'd like honest, specific feedback on this piece and how I could improve. Don't hesitate to be as direct or blunt as you can, even if it's a small comment, since every bit of advice helps.
Written By: Couldn'tThinkOfAName
December 25, 2020
GROUP: In This Together