Passionate_writer_samriddhi

India

She
Legendary born on 10th March
In my 17s
Love to make friends
Reading The Alchemist
Writing in my blood
And lastly... I m a BTS ARMY

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Life goes On

November 24, 2020

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Whenever the clouds of sorrow 
gather in your blue sky,
whenever the locusts of badluck
invade your green farms,
Never forget fight 
cause this is name of life.

At times you may may feel
that nobody feels you,
and with that feeling 
it feels that the world has stopped too.
You might feel targetted by hundreds
hundreds of sharp arrows,
and here comes the time 
of endless sorrow.

But this is the life dear
nothing stops here,
problems are there
just to be beared.

Love yourself, even when hundreds hate you,
then problems will also be a fun to you.
Never stop, keep moving
cause life never taught to stop
Life goes On.
Inspired by Life Goes On.

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4 Comments
  • storie_bird

    Re: Oh yeah, maybe let me do a review.... and some tip, if you want to reply to another writer's comment on your work. just find one of their pieces and then drop a comment starting with (Re:) to mean replying:) Hopefully you are having a good day!


    6 months ago
  • Passionate_writer_samriddhi

    Thank you so much!!
    Tell me if you find any lines to be improvised, ...


    6 months ago
  • storie_bird

    that stanza is so pleasing!


    6 months ago
  • storie_bird

    Love yourself, even when hundreds hate you,
    then problems will also be a fun to you.
    Never stop, keep moving
    cause life never taught to stop
    Life goes On.


    6 months ago