AJ - Izzy

Canada

How to write all of me in less than 10 seconds?

Hmm, let me think... how about DREAMER?

Yup. That works.

Message to Readers

Hello! Welcome to my world!
This piece is a story, the story of, as @Lata.B puts really well:
"the love is when they first start dating
the break up would be pain
and then years later would be the memory."
(thank you for the description:)
Anywho, have a nice day!!

hidden in the cracks of a world immersed in phantasm perfection

November 3, 2020

PROMPT: The Unseen

7
Love.
An entity in itself
Wafting through the air 
giving gifts of ethereal fantasies 
To the unassuming kind souls that walk this earth
gifts of kaleidoscope vision
drifting tirelessly into
powerful deep
love.

Hope.
A persistent whisper 
Slithering into the opened hearts
That love so graciously revealed to the world
That love so wondrously gave to a guy with deep blue eyes
that love so suddenly exchanged without a thought
coldly exposed to the harmful winds
awaiting an end
hope. 

Heartbreak.
Out of absolutely no where
A withering poisonous snake lunging
Clutches her heart in its deadly frigid grasp
Tears choked with the bitter taste of a life turned upside down 
emerging from the mist of pungent betrayal
a tangled fly in a lethal pernicious web
despair strikes her dead
heartbreak.

Pain
A monster in her head
Taking hold of those unassuming souls
Her soft delicately woven soul bleeding out
Thrashed into sickening entrapment in the dark and empty
thick chains shackled to her trembling wrists
suffering stabs in his web of agony
hostage to the monster
pain. 

Memory
A bitter thought
Sour remnants of lost moments
Thickly layered over the dissolving laughter
Tears running fast in a world of joyous memories turned dark
sobs escaping in a world starved of sweet light
nothing left but cold bleak nothing
a lost smile
memory.  

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4 Comments
  • Rachaelgrace

    I really like this piece!!


    6 months ago
  • Lata.B

    this made me think of the stages of a relationship aww
    like the love is when they first start dating
    the break up would be pain
    and then years later would be the memory
    Re- Thank you so so so much! It means a lot! :)


    6 months ago
  • Abrianna

    Wow this is amazing.
    Re: Thanks so much. I wrote that from an experience, and experiences are so hard not to re-live over and over.


    6 months ago
  • mirkat

    how did i miss this!? ahhh wonderful work as always i love your writing! so descriptive and i love the metaphors you used. keep writing! oh, another emotion to add would be nostalgia if you want to expand on this. <3


    6 months ago