Emi

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Message from Writer

"I choose joy!" (for King and Country).
"Speak Life." (TobyMac).
"I'm gonna fight for what's right." (Skillet)
"Not by might, not by power, by Your Spirit God." (Tasha Cobbs Leonard)
"Wake up." (NF)
"It's the smallest spark that can light the dark." (Newsboys).
"Are you the safest with the world loving you or had enough of you?" (Lecrae)
"He will heal our land but it starts right here." (Casting Crowns)
"I know You fill this aching soul. (Elle Limebear).
"You rescued me." (Jeremy Camp)
"I know a God who can change your life like He changed mine." (SavannaC)
"God makes no sense to humans. If we could understand God, He wouldn't be God anymore." (Me)
Currently reading Frankenstein by Mary Shelley.
JESUS 2020!!!!!

The Unseen

November 10, 2020

PROMPT: This I Believe

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I believe in wind, whispering though invisible
A waft of fresh breeze to invigorate my skin
I believe in gravity, the force of earth's pull
A steadying certainty hidden within

I believe in thunder, a clap of might
So loud it could break thought
I believe in skunk stench, for its acridness
Will leave me distraught

So I must believe in You, though I see you but little
For effects of Your might are not to be forgotten
You've made wind, gravity, thunder, and skunk
All these and more Your hand has begotten.

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9 Comments
  • In Which Yaya Writes

    Wow, this is beautiful! I love how you kinda personified each element, and how at the end you showed how it all pointed to God. Really nice imagery here! Great piece!
    Replying: Thanks! I’m so glad you liked it! I know “broken heart” is usually reserved for terrible sadness, but I feel like any heart that doesn’t belong to God yet is broken. But thank you!
    Oh, haha! That’s both funny and sweet XD.


    16 days ago
  • Rachaelgrace

    Beautiful!


    20 days ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thanks! I wrote it during that not-quite-sunset-not-quite-daylight time.


    20 days ago
  • Mpm#1

    Re: Glad you enjoyed!!


    20 days ago
  • Mpm#1

    Beautiful and true! :)


    20 days ago
  • BirdofPrey

    re: ooh yeah thats a good idea gonna change that now


    20 days ago
  • sunny.v

    i wrote about you in my appreciation post!: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/171791/version/339942


    6 months ago
  • sunny.v

    this is awesome!


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    YESSS!! I was trying to figure out how to say this, and you went and did it! :D


    6 months ago