suhanee

United States

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someday, once again

May 20, 2020

i know it feels like it's been 
raining for too long and that
the sun may never show. but
i have hope, that the sky will
bleed of sunlight someday, once
again.

i know it feels like your breath
has been pulled out of you and 
that inhaling old air hurts more
than it helps. but i have hope,
that the air will bleed of fresh
oxygen someday, once again.

i know it feels like the soil has
been crushed underneath your
feet and that each step you take
makes a small hole bigger. but
i have hope, that the ground will
bleed of fresh soil someday, once
again.

i know it feels like the trees have 
lost their green and the roses 
are shivering without bloom. but
i have hope, that the plants will
bleed of new birth and color someday,
once again.

i know it feels like life has been crushed
under great pressure and that it hurts 
to think about what the future may hold.
but i have hope, that your life will shine
of new stories and a new determination
someday. and you will be stronger than
ever before. 
 

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