Peer Review by Quarkoala (United States)

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my home in ten words

By: aditi


Cows bellowing
Rain thundering
ground squirrels chittering
stream gurgling
home.


Message to Readers

Stay safe everyone!


Peer Review

"Cows bellowing"


The sounds in the background are loud, but normal, and part of home.


Reviewer Comments

Consider changing "Rain thundering" to "rain thundering" in you next draft.