Peer Review by Quarkoala (United States)

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My Space and Soul

By: CrazyNinjaKid


 Bursting colours - disorganised creativity. Heart lyrically beating to symphony. 

First Published: 04/04/2020
Word Count: 10

Peer Review

"disorganized creativity."


Exiting, creative place.


Reviewer Comments

Tip: The big B at the beginning seems to be getting in the way. This can be avoided by adding an empty line at the beginning.