Dani A. Remlap

United States of America

~Seventeen~
-Senior (yes, really. I don't believe it either)
-Writer
-Trying my best
-Ravenclaw for life
-Endlessly curious
-Self-proclaimed poet
-I just wanna help people.
-So. Many. Books. To. Read.

Message from Writer

Life is crazy, but ultimately it's amazing

Look guys, I'm just seventeen and hopeless and filling these pages like it will save me.

I live for comments and reviews but I work twenty hours a week, and take college classes, so I'm not terribly active anymore.

A Correspondence

November 6, 2018

GROUP: Flash Fiction

Mamma, 
Don't hate me for leaving
I just couldn't stay anymore
I promise I'll write, 
I love you
-K

Mamma, 
I'm safe and warm, don't worry
Its so beautiful where I am
I swear to God I saw the stars dance the other night
I miss you
Love,
K

Mamma, 
I'm somewhere out East
I'm not solo anymore
He's kind and thoughtful
Went to university believe it or not
(I think I might love him, mamma)
-K

Mamma, 
Money's tight, but it always is
I sent some along with you though
Lord knows you'll have use for it
All my love,
K

Mamma, 
Can you believe it's been three years?
I told you I thought I loved him, I do
Oh God I do
I wish he could meet you
-K

Mamma, 
Sister Maria wrote
Said it was urgent I come home
I'll be there in four days time
I'm worried
Love,
K

Mamma, 
I miss you already
Its only been a day
God, I wish there was more time
-K

Mamma, 
We married last spring
It was beautiful
I wish you could've been there
-K

Mamma, 
I came to visit
Brought daisies, your favorites
I promise I'll replace them next time
Send papa my love
-K

Mamma, 
We have a daughter
Adeline is her daddy's laughter
But her mamma's fierce
But she's got your eyes
-K

Mamma,
These letters get more and more
sparse
Addie is four
A ball of lightning 
I miss you, you know
Four years since you died
Feels like yesterday at times
Love,
K

Mamma,
This is my last letter
I can breathe without glass in my lungs
When I think about you
That's called healing, I think
I'll think of you always
xo,
K

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4 Comments
  • Tziporah Dorfman

    That's beautiful! I love how the complete story is told through short letters. It's such a cool style to write in!


    about 1 year ago
  • Quille

    So sad! Gorgeously told :D


    about 1 year ago
  • The Bubbling Pen

    I love this!!! So beautiful and moving :)


    about 1 year ago
  • Johanna

    Beautifully told story through these short letters...


    about 1 year ago