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So this is my first time writing prose here on WTW so maybe a little help with improving it would really help. Thanks a lot


September 16, 2018

PROMPT: All in a Minute


GROUP: Flash Fiction

 A rock song blasts in her ears by she doesn't hear it. Her mind is somewhere else, but she tries to drown out her thoughts by turning the volume up. 

She wrenches her eyes away from those stupid texts that he sent that girl and looks around, for some respite.

He cracks his neck, sore from reading all the pages. Tolstoy's writing swarms in front of his eyes, so he looks up for some rest. 

Their eyes meet. Across the mob of people swarming in and out of the train gantry, the announcements blasting in the background, the beep of EZ-link cards tapping on the gantry, their eyes meet. 

She smiles. He smiles too. 

Then the crowd takes over. When it parts, they have both disappeared. 

The top part where the stuff "she" does, and the bottom part where the stuff "he" does happen at the same minute so yeah, just take note. 


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  • Catlover

    Wanted to let you know about my book club:

    about 1 year ago