JediKnightGirl

United States of America

15 y/o
Ace-Biromantic, she/her
Hopeless romantic, fangirl, feminist, anxiety
Hufflepuff, Hamiltrash, & more
Obsessed with Thomas Jefferson
Artist, Writer, Musician, Singer
Love, music, friendship are everything
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Message to Readers

I would really appreciate reviews on this piece if anyone has time. Thanks for reading!

This is unrelated, but ATTENTION! The last thing I published is a request to my readers. The title is in all caps, so it shouldn't be hard to find. If anyone can help me out with what it says, I'd appreciate it. Thank you guys so much!

Space

August 27, 2018

PROMPT: 55 Word Fiction

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GROUP: Flash Fiction

    A box in his pocket. Sadness in her eyes. "I need space, Daniel."
    A smile lit up his face. He pulled the box from his pocket, opening it to reveal a silver necklace with a moon pendant and matching earrings. "Space. For you."
    She looked at her galaxy-print ballet flats. "That's not what I meant."

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4 Comments

  • Johanna

    Oh my god. My heart. This piece is just so lively, and you did amazing with these beautiful 55 words.


    about 1 year ago

  • rainandsonder

    Oh wow this is great. Beautiful but also sad.
    Also did you change your profile pic??


    over 1 year ago

  • Quille

    Well written! But it's sad... :)


    over 1 year ago

  • Aussie23

    That's is really sort of sad, but beautiful.


    over 1 year ago