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"The waves knocked on the door, again and again, and came in." Beautiful, gorgeous line! Full of emotion.
I didn't even realize that it was all in one syllable until I read this question! Your story is wonderfully compelling and I really got sucked into it, wanting to know more of what happened before and what was going to happen.
I wish I knew how to write out the sound of an awed whistle. Because that's what I would do for this magnificent piece of writing.
Beautifully written and a charming work of art! I was awed and deeply touched.
Truly exquisite! I hope to read more of your work soon!