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Well...how many times have I published this piece?? I m losing count of my deeds lately....
In the beginning, it was portrayed like Brenda was having a affair with Robert, but she was merely trying to spend time with the brother she never knew. It was a total shock!
What was Robert's response after this? What is the whole story between Brenda and her brother? Robert knew Brenda's brother in college and he was a bully? It leaves so much twists and turns!
It was a great writing piece with a awesome plot twist!