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Frustration

By: Ldoodle22


Frustration is that bad smell you can't blow out of your nose, 
That buzzing in the background that you can't find. 
It's that sour taste that you can never quite wipe off your tongue,
A hazy mirage that drowns you in its fake yet tantalizing waters. 

 


Peer Review

It definitely adds another dimension to the emotion and how the author reacts to it, since different people experience emotions differently, and really provides a deeper understanding of how THIS specific person views THIS specific emotion.


I'd say flash fiction, honestly. It can retain the brevity while adding more into each sense - an example, perhaps?


Reviewer Comments

Short yet accurate!