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MimiChoudhury

India

Broken
Broken like the new China Vase lying on the sheath
Broken like my heart
Broken like my soul

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Unnoticed

March 17, 2019

Hot water streamed down, 
Against the soft surface.
With diligence,
It went down the rosy plateau.
Unnoticed by others,
But known to itself,
It splashed against an object,
And terminated its flow.
While the source looked up ,
With new found hope.
And the soft surface,
Glowed with a golden shine.
The plateau smiled softly,
Unnoticed by others.
 

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3 Comments
  • Johanna

    I love this! The repetition of "unnoticed by others" is wonderful, and I love the imagery as well!


    7 months ago
  • MimiChoudhury

    Thnk you so much


    7 months ago
  • korra4life

    I love the line, "Unnoticed by others, / But known to itself..."
    Great descriptions in this piece!


    9 months ago