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Message to Readers
Maybe I should stop writing poems when I´m supposed to do my homeworks...
Anyways... tell me how you feel about school and homeworks.
Can you relate to this poem?
Also feel free to tell me some things about the school system where you live as it is different in every country :D
I'm homeschooled, but I can still relate to this a lot. I like the way you used such clever phrasing to show the emotions of the day. It created a vivid, relatable picture for me :) Your rhymes are also very strong and well put to use :DD
Nothing really; I guess if you wanted you could add something like the color of the wall that the clock is on. But that's not necessary; I feel like your poem is really complete the way it is.
I really enjoy reading your poetry and hope that you keep writing it :D
Your word choices, rhymes/rhythm, and descriptions are all excellent and work well together to create a very strong, harmonious piece that captures emotion well and is very vivid for me :))
God Bless you and keep writing! :DD