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"Feeling her own emotions" because I relate to that one really well.
I think it plays the part of the author's dialogue. They use it to tell themselves that they don't want to be that way anymore. It provides an excellent, full-of-fire-and-attitude conclusion that shows just how much the author actually has come from being the previous girl :)
This sounds so familiar :D I literally tell myself the same thing anytime I think back to how I used to be. Even how I was just a few months ago.
This poem is highly relatable to me and is also motivational for me to keep changing. Thank you for writing it and I hope that you keep writing! :DDDD