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Onion3102

Australia

I drink way too much tea (with three sugars might I add), I like hugs a lot & thesaurus.com happens to be my best friend. It almost seems like the older I get, the more introverted I get.

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Pretty sure I'm going to find a mistake after I post this ahah... Feel free to comment and give feedback! Thank you!!

poetry

September 1, 2018

poem
/pəʊɪm/
noun
a piece of writing in which the expression of feelings and ideas is given intensity by particular attention to diction (sometimes involving rhyme), rhythm, and imagery.

Sure poetry is a vessel,
a way for teenagers to express petty angst.

Sure poetry expresses feelings,
demonstrating ideas for teachers to rip to shreds.

Sure poetry includes rhythm,
inspiring sad musicians to sing with new-found joy.

Sure poetry involves imagery,
enough to describe the very life of the writer.

But sure poetry is enough,
enough to make you see the world uniquely. 



 
Credit should be given to Google for the definition of poetry... Enjoy!

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2 Comments
  • Onion3102

    Thank you for the feedback Nausicaa!


    10 months ago
  • JadeAndSerpentine

    This is very good! One suggestion, though: put a comma after every "sure".


    10 months ago