Bwme

Demory

United States

I am afraid of being a cliche

Message to Readers

I could really use any sort of feedback. I've been thinking about this piece for a while and finally wrote it and got the courage to put it out there. I don't do poetry a lot. Please let me know if any aspect of it is good at all.

I Could Not See

December 8, 2015

FREE WRITING

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It was dark.
It was dark and I was yours.
It was dark and I was yours and you were mine.
It was dark and I was yours and you were mine or so I thought.
It was dark and I was yours and that I know.
It was dark and I thought you were mine.
It was dark and I thought wrong.
It was so, so dark.

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