This was my first poem prompt and I think I failed, despite the work and effort I put into it.
I basically jumbled all the words from the original poem to make a new one, but the meanings are similar. I guess that was the purpose to begin with. Anyway, I know it's a sucky poem, but I worked hard on it, so yeah, I'm publishing it. :)
Written By: Noa
July 7, 2015
GROUP: Poets and Wordsmiths
A tree is a poem that Gd made lovely;
A tree in whose leafy breast
robins shall intimately nest;
Who never prest her arms
against the earth’s bosom.
A tree, I think, lives only of snow
makes a fool of me as I see a summer rain
but in May, hungry tree has lain with Gd
and lifts mouth to pray.
A tree whose poems are flowing sweet
can wear all upon her hair like that by day.
This prompt (*challenge*) was extremely difficult, possibly because it was my first ever.
I did move the "s" from "fools" to "make" - making it "makes" and "fool".
I worked for an excessive amount of time on this, and the result is, in my opinion, only fair.
Read at your own leisure.