please, talk to me about dad rock.
okay so I participated in this writing workshop about a river, and because I'm in a biology class currently it made me think of the human body. Do these mini poems make sense when connected with one another? should I shorten any of them? does the clam metaphor make sense? all feedback is highly appreciated :)
Written By: Phoebe L
April 12, 2016
GROUP: Poets and Wordsmiths