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This is my first time on this site, so I'm not sure how it works. Please review it, and while you're at it tell me how the heck all this works. It's pretty cool from as far as I can see.
"I turn my head, rustle my hair, stick out my tongue and laugh." It's really an amazing line that just made me happy!
I really like how you went to happy and fun in the beginning, but then spiraled down to the sadness and pain of life. It brought connection.
I just wanted to say welcome, and congratulations on publishing your first piece! It's truly beautiful!
Your words were subtle yet evoking, your tone was magnificent, and your story was amazing!
Stupendous job! I can't wait to read more!
And once again,