Peer Review by Quille (United States of America)

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Bushes and Trees

By: Christy Wisdom


PROMPT: April

April is pink and white blossoms
On trees,
Sunshine forsythia bushes,
Lilacs budding and 
Wine red bundles of 
Delicate flowers
On our Japanese maple tree.


Peer Review

Yes! I can relate to this so well; it's exactly what April is like here! The same flowers and everything :)


What's your favorite month and which one is your birthday in?


Reviewer Comments

So, this isn't a great review. I won't count it as one of your prize reviews for my contest, but they're on the way too.
I love the descriptions in this a ton and, like I said, they're extremely easy to relate to :)
Keep writing! (I totally need a better catchphrase :).