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Message to Readers
When I think of urbanisation, I think of technology, and how we focus on that more than anything else. Please tell me what you think!
How much time do you spend using technology? And do you also feel lasy to go outside or do certain things when you can be so easily entertained, for hours on end, while staying in your room?
I completly agree with what you are saying and I feel that its always good to be reminded that this shouldn't be our way of life.
I know what yoy mean about Times Square. I have never been there but I share the same frustration when people talk about how the most beautiful places on Earth are urban cities. Part of me wishes that we could go back 2 hundred years to when towns were not so urbanised andpeople appreciated nature. Great piece by the way!