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About the Sea

By: PureHeart


PROMPT: "About the Sea"

Vexed by its thirst
For soveriegnty,
It is the epitome 
Of rage
As the waters
Submerse.

Hail the ocean!
They all cry out,
In hopes for people to
Listen
As the waters
Motion.

Drift together
Or tear apart?
Will it shatter or save
The race
Of nature's life,
Forever?
 


Message to Readers

The sea is a majestic, powerful force. Honor it. Respect it.


Peer Review

The image of the waves crashing into each other, and the fact that the ocran has the power to destroy or save all.


It creates a striking image.


Reviewer Comments

It was wonderfully poetic and had a good rythm or flow to it.