Craving spicy barbecue chips
I like rhymes and pizza
Also I hope you're having a good day :)
Don't do drugs. Seriously. Just don't.
Written By: omicron7889
January 22, 2019
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YES SURE I'M SORRY I ONLY READ THIS FIVE DAYS LATER I'LL GET RIGHT TO IT
BTW, I was wondering if you would please review this piece for me:
Title is: A POV Exercise - Elfboy Chapter 1
I'd be more than happy to review for you in return; I'm fairly good :)
mhm and suppositories too I presume?
ah if only white depressants and stimulants in the form of powder could be snorted through ear canals
@nezi_nes tenk you I owe it to my lack of coherent thoughts
@The Bubbling Pen
It's no problem at all :) I quite enjoy writing reviews
@omicron That is awesome. Your mind is awesome.
the bubbling pen
Hey Omicron :) Thanks so much for sending in a review!!!!!!! <3
Woop thanks for liking it!
I like this!
Heyy thank you so much!!
Inspiration uhhhh.... just thinking of random stuff and wanted to include crows in a poem, because of the more negative imagery they have. Then remembered that the collective noun for crows was 'a murder' and originally wanted to right something about someone committing a crime but that was too boring so settled on the crows being a metaphor for addictive thoughts and their destruction of our physical and mental health. 'take their final dive' is when the person finally overdoses (i could deconstruct this poem but honestly eh I'm supposed to be revising for my history mocks so i'll leave that)
Hey, thanks for your comment!
And I will definitely review your pieces. I'll drop a comment on one of your recent pieces the minute I'm done.
Great message that you carry through the piece and I love the rhythm of your poetry - it flows so well and is fun to read aloud as well! Awesome work on this poem <3
Ps. Just referring to your profile... would you mind reviewing a piece of mine? Either "It Started With A Note" or "We Are All Lost" thank you so much!!!!!!! :)
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