don't settle for the mundane;
chaos is far more intriguing.
constructive criticism welcome! i don't just love comments, i adore them, so don't hold back :)
Written By: asteria
February 13, 2019
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i love your poetry holy carp!
thanks sweet liza!
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I love this. and to answer your question, AdamRarity and I are dating in real life.
haha, too many times Zixdude. trying to finally get that 20 likes badge lol
How many times have you posted this?
awwwww thanks AlgelusWolf2004 :)
This is so cute ksgjslgj980jasoirvj <3
each one of the descriptions in the stanzas was brilliant and i love your writing <3
Thank you @AbigailSauble and @Johanna :)
'and you / are here.' Aw ... so beautiful. =)
Simple but beautiful :)
thank you @Plausible.Poems!
I like how you put your feelings into specific imaginative descriptions!
thank you @.audrey michelle.!!! i'm not that great at writing long stories and such, so mastering emotions in short poems was a must :D i will totally 100% tell you when i have more for you to read :)
absolutely beautiful! i love how u went from being alone from someone being there with you :D this was incredible and i loved the simplicity!
just by reading this one poem, i can tell that u can master bringing emotion through simplicity, and i l o v e that :D
tell me when u have something that u want me to read :D
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