Gabriel Goodwin

Philippines

Writing. Inspired. Art.
I've always been inspired by animation. It's strange really, but that's why I write!
The biggest challenge is to convey that in words.

Remember to write what you love! Peace!

/// WTW Writer since 2017 ///

Message to Readers

Very heavy stuff. Let's get that out of our lives.

Despite this piece, I am glad to say I'm a happy person living out his life to the fullest.

All thanks to the person who told me to write in WriteTheWorld.

Lose. Loser. Loss. Lost.

January 19, 2019

FREE WRITING

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Lose.
Runaway woman,
That was my mother
Who spoke illy;
    The life she gave birth to
    Was "trash" 

Loser.
Give a day, bullies -
Reminded me of my faults
Never got better:
    "Why are you like this?"
    "Answer me, trash"

Loss.
The happiness / The love,
Drained from my eyes,
I'm so sorry...
    Let me make it up to you >
    < It's fine. Just leave me, trash.

Lost.
An empty man...
Where do I go from here?
I don't know.
    (Trash can)
    [ D e l e t e ]
 

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3 Comments
  • Quille

    Um, if you don't get enough requests to keep you busy, do you think you could review this piece? Any/all feedback on it would mean so much to me and I'll gladly review for you also :)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/99991/version/190166


    over 1 year ago
  • Quille

    Wow!! That was soo well done!!! I love the concept and you did a fantastic job weaving your message into this. Awesome! :DDDDDD


    over 1 year ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    Whoa this is a really cool piece. Awesome job. :D


    over 1 year ago