Gabriel Goodwin

Philippines

Writing. Inspired. Art.
I've always been inspired by animation. It's strange really, but that's why I write!
The biggest challenge is to convey that in words.

Remember to write what you love! Peace!

Message to Readers

Very heavy stuff. Let's get that out of our lives.

Despite this piece, I am glad to say I'm a happy person living out his life to the fullest.

All thanks to the person who told me to write in WriteTheWorld.

Lose. Loser. Loss. Lost.

January 19, 2019

FREE WRITING

7
Lose.
Runaway woman,
That was my mother
Who spoke illy;
    The life she gave birth to
    Was "trash" 

Loser.
Give a day, bullies -
Reminded me of my faults
Never got better:
    "Why are you like this?"
    "Answer me, trash"

Loss.
The happiness / The love,
Drained from my eyes,
I'm so sorry...
    Let me make it up to you >
    < It's fine. Just leave me, trash.

Lost.
An empty man...
Where do I go from here?
I don't know.
    (Trash can)
    [ D e l e t e ]
 

Print

See History
  • January 19, 2019 - 5:34am (Now Viewing)

Login or Signup to provide a comment.

3 Comments
  • Quille

    Um, if you don't get enough requests to keep you busy, do you think you could review this piece? Any/all feedback on it would mean so much to me and I'll gladly review for you also :)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/99991/version/190166


    11 months ago
  • Quille

    Wow!! That was soo well done!!! I love the concept and you did a fantastic job weaving your message into this. Awesome! :DDDDDD


    11 months ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    Whoa this is a really cool piece. Awesome job. :D


    11 months ago