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The structure in general is just perfection. Its length gives the reader enough insight to knoe whats going on, but also leaves them on a vague and powerful cliffhanger at the end. This piece is so poetic, but its also like writing down observations. 'Maybe we're a little more than just friends' makes it seem like a casual, brief wandering, yet this poem is formal obviously well thought out!
Perhaps add in some more of the senses. You've mentioned touch when you said 'your fingertips trace my throat,' which was very powerful and almost mysterious! You've also mentioned sound, when you said 'the sound of my voice when I cal you babe.' Because these quotes were so good, and the fact you incorperated these senses in your writing, I would just love to see what else you could do with this, adding maybe one or two more of the senses, or perhaps zooming in on the senses you've already mentioned.
Its always a pleasure to read your writing, and I can't wait to see more of your pieces! You've got a real, natural talent! Keep up the fantastic work!