loveletterstosappho

United States

writer of stories, lover of girls

maybe we're a little more than just friends

January 16, 2019

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'cause there's a tinge of sincerity
in the way your fingertips trace my throat
and the sound of my voice when i call you babe
so maybe we're a little more than just friends
a natural disaster biding its time--
a little more than just friends
but a lot less than anything else.

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18 Comments
  • ParisInFrance

    ahh! i know this is close to a year old now but WOW! i love this so much, your way with words is powerful and captivating and just incredible.


    over 1 year ago
  • Kenny

    I love this, but you didn't have to attack me like this :')


    over 2 years ago
  • bride124

    This poem is literally mesmerizing! Keep on writing!


    over 2 years ago
  • luluwrites111

    Yes YES yes omg love this *stops breathing for a few seconds* beautiful.


    over 2 years ago
  • luluwrites111

    Yes YES yes omg love this *stops breathing for a few seconds* beautiful.


    over 2 years ago
  • Londlike Bar

    Natural disaster indeed


    over 2 years ago
  • Luna Lemon

    This is just as incredible as everyone else is saying it is. Your beauty with words is remarkable, in just the few seconds that I read this poem, I was completely immersed and held my breath through its entirety. ¨in the way your fingertips trace my throat¨ and ¨a natural disaster biding its time¨ are such beautifully poetic lines as you use words like 'trace' and 'biding' to really set the tone. The ending is incredible too, the bittersweet hopefulness is really well done. Great job and keep writing:)


    over 2 years ago
  • blueburns

    This is good! I think it's also transferable, too, so a lot of people can find a way to relate to it. The last two lines hit especially hard!


    over 2 years ago
  • TheOriginalEliza™

    I wish I could like this twice, I love it and I want to write it on everything


    over 2 years ago
  • Julius Caesar

    hmmmmmm....... *insert thinking emoji here if it doesn't load*


    over 2 years ago
  • acrosstheskysky

    this is sO pRETTY?? wow it's like lyrics to a song amazing


    over 2 years ago
  • elisa

    that's the wlw world baby


    over 2 years ago
  • twinkleprose

    this is really pretty
    thanks for all the kind comments on my profile btw


    over 2 years ago
  • Anha

    oof you kill me, this is every longing wlw's hopeless situation


    over 2 years ago
  • pieridae!

    Awe! I thought this was gonna be happy, but the last line was just heartbreaking! Especially because I have been in that place many times before. Just beautiful and stunning!


    over 2 years ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    this is beautiful! im speechless!


    over 2 years ago
  • paperbird

    this is so beautiful. the ending sentence in particular.


    over 2 years ago
  • the bubbling pen

    "a natural disaster biding its time" great way to describe the phenomenon that is love :) Amazing work <3


    over 2 years ago