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This piece is strong and compelling, urging the reader to keep reading until the very end, and leave them wanting more. Metaphorically, almost everything about this piece makes sense, and is described in wonderful ways, one can picture all that is happening. To add on, many readers can relate to this the story and/or meaning behind the piece, and through this read, readers know they aren't alone.
A few questions were placed among the highlights, however, there is the question of where did you get your inspiration from? How did this come to you? Is it personal, or pure fiction?
This piece is wonderful and impressively written. Great work!
Congratulations on your nomination by Anha.