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This title didn't prepare for the piece written, however, it's beautifully done, and written unique and in a way that leaves the writer wondering. The style of this story is what of the best parts about it, how you pick the perfect things for the characters to say, how they say it, how you word each of your details, where all of it goes. Everything about the organization and development of this piece is creative and original. The contrasting characters are a story of their own, and making fate the man and coincidence the girl was genius. Everything about this screams at me and how the two relate and are different from each other. Details! Details! Details! You picked the perfect ones to add, and said them beautifully. The time period is in the 20s, therefore not in this time, or a made up one, which lots of writers/authors use. Great choice! Your inspiration must of ignited a fire in you, because this piece s wonderful!!
Which do you believe in, one over the other? A little bit of both? Neither? Life's just life? Do you think their opinion's could be switch? Or would it have to take a different scenario?
Congratulations on your nomination by Anha!!