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This is old but I would like some critical feedback for improvement. Plz and thx.
I was moved by how well the author understands the enormous issue today of fitting in, and what it can do to a person
Don't deepen it. This story probes the readers mind, bringing up their own situations and emotions regarding the topic, and I think that is exactly how it should be.
I just want to say that I can relate to this very personally, because I am one of my biggest judges, and it's caused me some real issues, especially in combination with my anxiety. This was a wonderful piece, and I feel like I can connect with it