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infj | poet | daydreamer
harry potter lover

Message to Readers

i'm trying to do lines with matching syllables and emphasis and it's hard---feedback is appreciated

to mother earth

January 10, 2019


take me to the simple hills
where the azure lifts and falls
where the sky and sea combine
in the great and roaring winds

take me to the mountain grass
where i knelt beside a deer
and i felt her roaming eyes
like whispers on my pink cheeks

take me to the widened glades
and string me to trees like fruit
i squeezed a peach, soft and brown
falling sap cradled my tongue

take me to a better time
when the world was lush and small
the deer breathed with soft pines
mother earth---preserver, creator


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  • RainAndSonder

    Why are you so good at writing?? This is beautiful! The imagery is so vivid and matching syllables/emphasis thing works really well!

    2 months ago
  • paperbird

    thank you!

    2 months ago
  • Quille

    Very beautiful and touching :D Excellent imagery and emotional wording! :DDDD

    2 months ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    im speechless

    2 months ago