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this is the turning point
its not gay if im genderqueer ;)
Written By: jengelman
January 10, 2019
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oh this makes me sMiLE so hard. "your lips are the same colour as my suit. / i read them at mealtimes" is so fucking lovely i read it three times over. honestly i disagree with some of the comments - i think that the ending (especially the last line) finalizes this bitterness that has been laced throughout the poem and also references the first stanza ("you play beving in utmost solitude. "). i love this! very much!
ahhhh how are you so good at poetry
Agreed with Anha1
this imagery was beautiful, and I love this to bits but I feel like the last three lines didn't quite end the poem in a way that gave it your usual justice? idk what i'm saying
Dis da good shit. I love this so much dammit
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