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The adjectives at the beginning immediately hooked my attention. It paints a very clear image that attracts the reader's attention. The first two sentences are well written. The analogy is amazing and I love it!
I really enjoyed the word choice. It is very descriptive and attracted my attention. Also, the way your own personal experience was peppered throughout the review made it a very compelling review. It made it unique and interesting. I also liked how you used the other Google reviews to support your own opinion despite them being negative. It shows your own personal experience and how the movie was an accurate representation of being gay in a non-supportive community. It convinced me that the movie is accurate and realistic.
The details you provided to support your opinion were perfect. It supported your ideas of the movie very well. I would like more details about the imagery and why you thought it wasn't deserving of a 10/10. Also, more characters and why you thought they weren't portrayed that well. It seems unfair to point out only one character and a small example of another. Just elaborate on the negative aspects as the overall feeling I got was that the movie was amazing and you enjoyed a lot. Highlight the negative bits a little more to reflect the rating at the bottom.
This review overall was amazing. The reflection of yourself in the main character was present and showed that the movie was accurate in portraying the dilemma of a person who is coming to terms with them self. I hope that you continue writing and improving this wonderful piece! Your writing style was impressive and I enjoyed it a lot. Good luck!
I love this review and the movie. It made a really positive impact on me. It is very hard to find realistic movies about people that are biased against today. Thank you for writing this review. I am really looking forward to watching this! Good luck again with the competition!