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Peer Review
I love the part where you say "as if they were simply an annoying mistake in a beautiful picure you were drawing." It's such a beautiful simile. However, I feel like the first sentence could be more hooking. It feels too long, like a run-on sentence. Maybe you could describe the movie with shorter sentences.
I loved the last sentence. This is really convincing me to watch the movie. The word choice is wonderful, and the way you stated it was perfect.
I think you could have talked more about the imagery. Some of the paragraphs seem too long, and could be cut.
I thought that this was very convincing, and I definately want to watch this now! I feel like you covered most of the points, which is great.
Reviewer Comments
Great job overall! This was great! (Also, this doesn't count as one of the reviews for your prizes, I'm working on those.)