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Message to Readers
Well this is interesting...
constructive critique,
thanks!
Peer Review
I loved the line 'Can you come back' because it makes the reader think and gives them a feeling of mystery.
The way you wrote it gave the piece feeling and I loved that!
Reviewer Comments
Your writing is awesome and I love it!