Wings

Sarah Grimson

Australia

Message to Readers

Well this is interesting...
constructive critique,
thanks!

Where were you?

February 20, 2015

PROMPT: Where Were You?

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Where were you? 

when the sun went down,

when the moon came up,

Where were you?

 

Where were you?

when I needed a shoulder to cry on,

A light to guide me,

Where were you?

 

Where were you?

I needed you,

You were gone,

 Where were you?

Can you come back?

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2 Comments
  • Soph Gibson

    Agreed Zoe. Simply majestic writing. Although, as a friend, your capitalization is a touch wonky in parts. Love the last line.


    over 2 years ago
  • Zoe

    I absolutely love this and I can not find anything wrong with it!


    over 2 years ago