make your mark
save the world
become tik tok famous
I want to find a way to inspire everyone else while saving the world while tik tokking
will u help me?
Written By: Jae
January 7, 2019
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Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked this, and are giving me so much hope right now... so thank you so much, I rlly appreciate your support for me!
Hey, I wanted to remind you that my contest deadline is tomorrow if you were still interested in entering :D
Also this poem is really, really awesome! :DDDDDD I like the stanza that begins 'use your voice' best :DD
Always be bold! It takes courage, but it's worth it!
I'm praying for you!
Bubbling Pen, thank you so much! Yes, i am kind of like dr. suess when it comes to poetry! Also, yes thank you on that! My "man" is absent right now, but that doesn't mean he won't come and surprise me when I need it!
The Bubbling Pen
Awesome work! This reminded me of Dr. Seuss' rhyming style, so congrats <3 Also, I hope you find your man :)
Thanks so much puppet_master... i rlly appreciate that. my mom has this saying that if you see it, you'll believe so it's silly but i put a piece of tape on my ceiling above my bed that says "be bold" so it's the first thing i see every morning when I wake up which is just fun. i'm glad you liked tis, and can't wait to work on a story together!
wish we lived closer though! it's so fun that i'm working on a story with someone from australia... i mean WHAT EVEN???????
well, i've read your stuff, and you are so talented, and i rlly appreciate you reaching out to work with me, and i think it will be fun, so yeah.
This. Was. Great. I can't write poetry this. It flowed really well and I just overall enjoyed this. And about working on a story together. I'm 100% fine with that and I would really enjoy it! Hope being bold goes well today!
i sure hope i'll have more luck... but thanks so much! i love early comments... but late ones are fun cause it's like... oh yeah, remember that? i'm so glad someone felt my pain on that!- and i just love doing that, so yup, not a problem. i've decided that part of being bold, is going to be putting all my free hours into publishing a book, so getting my book typed is what i'm working on now, so being bold is going to be a little different for me... but that doesn't mean you shouldn't go out there and make your dreams come true, even if you are rejected. that's just part of the process!
this is so late, but poor u!!! that guy is mean!
ull have luck!
ok... i was bold at school today, and asked this guy out and he said no, and now i feel just depressed, so not sure if this resolution is working out for me... but y'know.
right now, i'm watching netflix, eating ice cream, and hyperventiltating cuz i hav to see this guy tonight at show choir, so... look where that resolution got me! :C
Not saying you guys should give up on your resolutions though! i'm sure you'll have better luck than mine!
yes, i am so glad you guys like this piece. i feel like lately there are so many things i want, but i don't use my voice, so it's good to speak out :D
Also, i HAVE to be bold, because part of my new years resolution was to be a lot bolder than i was in 2018, so saying things i wouldn't say before is helping e out of my comfort zone, and helping me become a better person!
Glad you all read my stuff, and like it!
I love this so, so much, and I can relate to it right now, too. Thank you for writing!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
this is beautiful and so true... we all need to use our voices more, especially in that kind of situation! i absolutely love this!
Hey Early Pearl,
I saw that you liked my piece, and I was wondering what you thought was good, or if I should change anything. See, we are having this poetry unit at school and I want to present this, but I didn't know if it were good or bad, so i put it on here for people to judge.
If you could please tell me what you think... that would be great, thank you so much!
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