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Majestically Awkward Manatee

United States

13 years old.
california.

imagine dragons.
coldplay.

aquarius.
ravenclaw.
infj-t.

cat lover.
coffee drinker.

golfer.
figure skater.

pianist.
singer.
dancer.
artist.

writer.

dreamer.

❤️

Message to Readers

Feedback is appreciated!!!

The Striped Mask #cliffhangerqueencontest

January 12, 2019

FREE WRITING

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The forest was full of smoke and loud shouts. I watched the last people fall to the ground in defeat, spears or broken arrows in their stomachs. Tears streamed down my cheeks as I shot another fire arrow. It hit a man with deadly accuracy.

I crouched lower, but one man spotted me. 

“She’s there!” he shouted. I stood up. A moment of silence came upon the forest, besides the fire burning. Then, they all came at me. 

I pulled out my knife and slashed and them, but there were too many. Someone knocked me to the ground. I sat there staring at all of them, their striped masks, and prepared myself for death.

One man grinned down at me with malice. He got his spear ready for striking, when suddenly a voice boomed “STOP RIGHT THERE!” 

Everyone turned around to look, and so did I. What I saw next was so astonishing. It was him.
This is for Quille’s contest! Hope you enjoy :)

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  • Majestically Awkward Manatee

    @Quille thanks for letting me know :)


    5 months ago
  • Quille

    Winners announced! :)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/103314/version/197305


    5 months ago
  • Majestically Awkward Manatee

    @Quille yea I fixed some spelling and grammar mistakes XD


    6 months ago
  • Quille

    Ooh! It's even better now :DD Fantastic!! :DDDD


    6 months ago