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Majestically Awkward Manatee

United States

13 years old.
california.

imagine dragons.
coldplay.

aquarius.
ravenclaw.
infj-t.

cat lover.
coffee drinker.

golfer.
figure skater.

pianist.
singer.
dancer.
artist.

writer.

dreamer.

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"be a voice
not an echo."✨
-albert einstein

Ellipsism #myfirstcontest

January 4, 2019

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A baby’s cry echoes through the room
Tears fall to the floor
Joy and grief combined 
Never living through it all

Blood stained snow
A death before a death
Real tears of sorrow
Last cry, last breath
This is also for Dmoral13’s contest!
Prompt 2: Elipsism
This might not be exactly what you asked for and I might not have told the story clearly enough.
What happens is that the grandfather sees a newborn baby and he thinks that he won’t be able to see him grow up because of his old age, but that night they are both killed in the snow... so yea, kinda dark. 

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4 Comments
  • Dmoral13

    Contest winners announced!! Good luck!


    6 months ago
  • korra4life

    That was really dark but I like it. It was simple yet had such a devastating effect and was really sad.


    7 months ago
  • Majestically Awkward Manatee

    @Quille aww thanks!!! Glad you liked it :)


    7 months ago
  • Quille

    Ooh! You are so totally a poet! :DD Good luck in the contest!
    I love the last line 'last cry, last breath' it brings the poem to such a devastating conclusion :D


    7 months ago