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Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill

United States

13 years old.
In love with books.
Ranger's Apprentice. 1
Dawn of Wonder. 2
Wings of Fire. 3
Warriors. 4
Percy Jackson. 5

ENFP-T

Coldplay.
Beatles.

Guitarist.
Artist.
Screamer.
Lover.
Actor.

Join Date: September 12, 2018

Message from Writer

I have found that what I put here before was very deep.
Nah...
Just wanted to say hi.
So hello.

And remember that whoever you are, however you look, in what way you think, what you drink, how you express yourself, how you write, what music you listen to, and even how long your fingernails are, the only real thing about you is what you decide to be.

Elipsism #myfirstcontest

January 12, 2019

FREE WRITING

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The soundwaves of


C
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  L
   O
    R
Encapsulate
            The
                Spinning
                      Top
                            Of The
                                U N I
                            E          V
                               S R E  
in a flower of a magnolia blossom just fallen
in the living wind of the 
S
         T
          O
                R
                    M
                        !
    Of The WORLD's waters
And the sunset created by the moons love and rage.

I have found my peace in the calling of the 
            N
        U      T        I  
    O               A       N                  
T H E     
M                                 S
  A  N D         ​    ​R I V E R S;;;......
that the miracle grove of haven has decided to show me.

                                And when
which is when, not if
                                I am invited to a chat (of course with tea and crumpets)
with the universe
                                I'd ask if it were tired
It'd probably say yes
                                And I'd feel sorry and realize there was nothing to do

And when I made my trip back home from the universe, I would look into the infinite darkness of time and sit there for awhile. I would take a couple of breaths and think, or maybe even shout—I couldn't be sure—
"there is a lot going on around here"
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3 Comments
  • AJ - Izzy

    Just looking at this piece from the outside pulled me in! The format is super cool, I love how you used boldness and capitals and whatnot to make it pop! It's funny, it's unique, and it shows off your amazing talent! I especially loved that last paragraph-- genius, pure genius ;)
    Keep writing, you're amazing at it!
    AJ


    5 months ago
  • Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill

    Thank you!


    5 months ago
  • Luna Lemon

    This was really interesting to read. I love how you experimented with the format of this piece, it really allowed me to slow down and appreciate each word and image you created. I especially liked your creative choice with the word, "mountain". I love the lines, "I am invited to a chat (of course with tea and crumpets) / with the universe". It just adds a bit of character to the narrator and it has an ironically funny quality to it. I loved reading this piece as you really played with the beauty of words such as in the sentence, " I would look into the infinite darkness of time and sit there for awhile." This poem was really well done and so interesting to read.
    Awesome job and keep writing:)


    5 months ago